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Strength

Take me away from heartache,
my Love,
Carry me to the stars.

Bask with me, here
In the moon's silver glow,
That washes away all these scars.

Walk with me, dear,
down this oak tree-lined street
and forget about yesterday.

The clouds in this sky
are floating away
and sunlight is here to stay.

Author notes

I wrote this in about 5 minutes. I don't think it's excellent, but I do like it a bit. I'm looking for an outlet cause I've had mixed feelings about a friend the past few nights. This poem is certainly not about the friend, for I'm not in love with him, but I have been having a hard time with him lately. Thanks for reading. No serious critiques necessary, this was just a little personal piece not meant to be OHMYGODAMAZING.

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