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Silver Dagger

a twisted world
pulling away muscles flexed
the world clinging to my skin as i pull from it
sweet covers my body as i yell out
this world fell's like it's stretching and tearing at my skin
now on top of this world
my jet black wings burst open
slinging blood across the world
i stand the perfect being
all my muscles tight
a ruined black winged angel
cursed and hated by most
and feared by all
before me lies her
the innocent dimness
her hand held out for me tears in her eyes
why
i don't believe i deserve her
but if she can change this
i must take the chance

Author notes

this one kinda sucked im zorry

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  • LovesPlayToy
    August 17
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    ...i love u
    and NO IT DOESNT SUCK
    jeeze
    innocent