Warm evening breeze
Gently kisses your face
Strands of hair float in every direction
Delicately gracing
Heaven's finest creation
Clear sky stretches for miles
With no trace of ethereal glimmer
In its shadowy silhouette
Only can the stars be found
Burning brightly
In your eyes
Mesmerizing
Captivating
Beautiful
Author notes
Prompt: 5. The stars are alive tonight
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525 points, ended August 27, 7 entries
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amazing job with this. i saw the prompt in your author notes, and i think you did amazing with it
thanks for entering the contest and best of luck.
write on.
~*~SP~*~
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Only can the stars be found
Burning brightly
In your eyes
Mesmerizing
Captivating
Beautiful
You have some LOVELY word usage here. (i.e. mezmerizing...ah.)
Awesome work and thanks so much for entering this into my contest. Good luck.
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Wow great take on the prompt I love this write
I also loved the title
Great write
Thank you so much for entering my contest and Good luck
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Awesome as always
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Well worded and thoughtful
Maybe last stanza could start with "It can only..." Or not.
Tecohe
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'Only can it be found
Burning brightly
In your eyes'
beautiful, truly beautiful and it has so much power in it and emotion, congratulations on a beautiful poem conveying love in such a stunning way -
Incredible.
This was excellent. I liked every line, and I don't think it needs any revision, although my favorite line was:
"Delicately gracing
Heaven's finest creation"
This was great, and I would love to read more. Keep writing!
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Very nice. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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Oh my, this is such a lovely piece.
Very tender emotions here that really reach the heart.
I love the word "captivating"
Marvelous job with this write!
Bravo and thank you for entering
♥ Kate -
wow. loved EVERY line, thank-you for entering
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very nice lines slowly winding down to beautiful. i really like strands of hair delicately gracing heaven's finest creation - such a soft loving feel.
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A lovely piece and very well written. Thank you for this fine entry.
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This is awesome! I love the imagery and thought
that you put into this. Wonderful work bringing
this prompt to life with your words my friend!
All the best to you here and take care!
Jeremy0826
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