The stars guide us,
And the wind gives us wings,
To leave this shore behind us,
and reach for new Horizens,
Where Dragons await us to discover them.
A sandy beach awaits us,
Where the palm trees whisper "Welocome",
An The Seagulls tell our story,
To all of the native birds,
Two lovers just longing,
To be with each other,
Meet and Kiss passionately,
Walking along The sandy beach of Romance,
They tell each other "I love you",
Then walk towards the place,
Where they know that they were meant to be.
Romance from my life mixed with a little bit of Fantasy!!! What do you think Everyone?
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Awe this was awesome dear great write. keep on writing dearie
Searra
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Great
i love it, great pice, its something i believe many of us dream of, beautiful, just a couple of spelling errors like you put an on the eighth line where it sould be and, i think, and welocome is spelt welcome, but it was still great, and if those are the only too mistakes, then this is great, never stop writing
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Amazing!
That is so awesome! The title matches the poem perfectly! For what is love but something new and forever expanding and learning like the horizen that is set before us. I like how you made it entwined with nature as well! For what is the feelings that we have for that one so special feel anything other than natural? Very well done, little brother!
Maggie 
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Awe very heartfelt and indeed so beautiful. I love it so much Daniel. It's so romantic and so touching. This poem made me smile. You written this so beautifully. I hope you continue writing ^^ I really enjyed reading this
- Love your twin
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aww dan its really great and so beautiful...it melted my heart
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Amazing
finally some really good romance! this is amazing! so sweet and beautiful. keep writing!
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moonlight vampire
Aww I love this poem little brother this is very romantic and sweet. I love the emotions u put into this poem great write and keep on writting good poems.
sincerly,
angel
aka
moonlight
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very beaufily writenten hun
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awww! this is sooo cute! i wanna cry...
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This is really good wollf i like it keep it up
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man, you are so good with these romance poems. you little romantic player. lovely, as always. you have a way with words. you always write something beautiful. I can't help but adore it.
You need to shed some of that talent my way. you have more than enough. and i am a very needy girl. >.<
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