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What You never said to me...

Drunken words are trapping me
They’ve got my hands tied back
And a hold of my feet
And careless sex is calling me
To a one night stand on your street

Flashes of white are haunting me
Scars of war and cries for peace
This love is where I’m falling
Don’t let me go

Cause I’m trying not to fall here
And i know who you are
But I’ve seen who you can be
“Somehow you’re gonna save me”
Is the tragedy I’m painting

Tearless eyes flushed with green
Captivate me
They tell how beautiful I can be

Truthful lies
And deceiving smiles
Are all I see
And I can’t believe
I’m falling again


Drunken words have trapped me tonight

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Don't really have a title, soooo sorry.

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  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    August 17

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    Welcome To Allpoetry

    Welcome to AllPoetry! I hope you have lots of fun on this site!
    This has a sadness to it. The reader can feel the poet's pain in each line, and how she sees the potential that her love has, but at the moment it's stagnant.


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    Jeremy
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  • RommelPatton
    August 15
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    its good