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Take My Word

Take my hand
We'll make it...
I swear.

And I promise I'll always be there
I won't let you down
Or ever let you frown.

I'll be yours and you'll be mine
And we'll be happy all the time.

Take my heart
We'll make it...
I swear.

I'll hand over the key
And maybe then you'll see
Just how much you truly mean to me.

I'll prove my devotion
I'll show my loyalty
And I'll give you all the love you need.

Take my word
We'll make it...
I swear.

Forever and always
The good times and the bad
Holding you close at night
Falling asleep
Listening to our hearts beat.

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  • HaleyMary
    September 17

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    This was beautiful. I liked the flow of this poem. It reminded me of a bit of a song. For some reason I had "Everything I do I do it for you" by Bryan Adams running through my head when I read this. Anyway, thanks for sharing and keep that pen flowing.