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Night Terrors

I am a killer nightmare
The most frightening
Thing to ever stalk the night
Stay awake if you can love
I am waiting if you fail
I can be anything
But I promise I am hell
So say your prayers my dreamer
Your end is about to begin
Lose your soul at midnight
Night Terrors always win

Author notes

My name is N i g h t T e r r o r s I have a group by the same name if you can't tell I really love freddy

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  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    September 1

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    Hah very nice I liked it. Freddy movies are really good I'm more of a Jason fan but Freddy's still cool. Anyway great job on the poem and best of luck to you in my contest.




    -Steve-


  • Not-The-Sun gold member
    August 24

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    oh man this is sort of eerie and creepy the first two lines are good openers and the last two lines really sum it up well and left me with a chilling feeling. I love reading these poems about usernames great poem! good luck in the contest!


  • trekkergirl
    August 16

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    this must be a popular contest because you are like the 2nd or 3rd entry into this I have read tonight and all of them have been wonderful. I liked this... you remind me of alfred hitchchock on TV the one who did all the beginnings and endings of those scarey shows I use to watch as a kid. Probably spelled his name wrong but I am sure you know who I mean. Great job


  • awannabepoet
    August 15

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    And an end so divine it would be....

    LOL

    I love your AP name it is very very scary and keeps me up at night.


  • xeroabyss II
    August 15

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    OOOOO, all succubus like.
    Though you mention Freddy in your AN, succubi are much awesomer.
    Wicked little self explainatory write.

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