Let me be alone by the time I wake up
as it hurts to be with you.
Please when I open my eyes in morning rays
I would like to be in an empty room.
shackled up my thoughts buried deep in the oceans
is the silence that wakes me up?
My muse has left with the morning sunshine
as it hid the scar of the night.
By the time I wake up
I want to be left alone
as it hurts to be with you.
my loneliness my despair…
Silence approaches as the day greys
and I welcome the sadness home.
The trees the birds carol me in melancholy
and I lay down as the shore of the ocean.
Time to time I see the world
rather more disappointed,
all I want is for the thing my heart sways.
… confusion is building.
But when I see the life bestowed to me
all that seems small and I stand up,
like the mountains pulling the land together
let ocean and winds growl and pant me.
I will smile with it as I have to move on.
when I open my eyes in morning rays,
I would like to be in an empty room
with just me and myself…
Author notes
this poem is about the answer we know in life but not the questions.. i hope this could inspire something out of your own experiences
god bless
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Very nice...There are times when you want to be left alone...so that you can hide scars and pain given to you as gift by others....
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Let me be alone by the time I wake up
as it hurts to be with you.
Please when I open my eyes in morning rays
I would like to be in an empty room.
Wow friend this is sharp full with feeling and beautifully wrote love it!
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thanks neen; it meant a lot
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