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Gone but not forgotten....

Its been bout six months since you left this earth
And the tears never stopped
I sit looking at your picture for hours
I put on all your favorite songs
I stay thinking bout the good times
I remember the advice you use to give me
I can still hear your voice, your laugh
Your smile alone brightined my whole day
You was there when I needed you the most
I should've went to the hospital to visit you
But I didnt
I thought you were going to be okay
That youll be home in a couple days
And shit would go back to normal
I guess God had other plans for you
I had to say my goodbye that day at your funeral
Seeing you laying in that casket
I nearly fell to the floor
You looked so peaceful
Like you were just sleeping
I was hoping you was going to wake up
But im glad that you have to suffer no more
Your son was there and he reminds me of you
The way he talks and walks
And especialy how bad he acts haha
I remember when I first met your son and he tried to beat me up
There was so many people there
And we were all there cause we care and love you
Damn your ass is missed so much
No matter what I will never forget you Ray Ray
You touched my heart and my life
Ill see you again in heaven one day
LOVE YOU RAYSHAWN
Bye for now

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REST IN PARADISE....
*RAYSHAWN PIERRE GUESS*
One of my closest and bestest friend I ever had!!

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  • one-broken-heart
    October 19

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    Oh wow. Im so sorry. I don't want to sound like probably a lot of people by saying I get your pain, but the thing is...In a way I do. Just this past saturday I lost my best friend in a car accedent. She was only 16. Me and my friends just decided that God couldnt take not having her in his choir anymore cause she was such an amazing singer. I know we don't know each other, but Im sorry to hear (or well in this case read) about your friend. You just never think that it'll happen in your life or with your friends, until it really does.....*hugs*

    -holly


    • DeSiBoO14
      October 19
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      ThAnK U sOo mUcH fOr Ur ThOuGhTfUl CoMMeNt!!It mEaNt AlOt 2Me!! It MaKeS mE fEeL bEttEr WeN pPl KaN rElAtE 2wAt Im GoIn ThReW!!...n Im SoO SoRRy BoUt Ur FrIeND!!


  • A dEaD dReAm
    August 27

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    awwww sissy thats sad im sorry that happend amazing poem by the way i havent been writing becausse i havent had internet because i was moving but i have it now and im here for you!! i love you always love your sissy katelynn


    • DeSiBoO14
      August 29
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      aWw..tHaNkZ sIssY!!iM hAppY 2hEaR 4rM U!!i MiSseD u SoO MuCh!!BuT hOw R u??WaTs NeW??
      lOvE u SiSSy!!

  • mina nagi gold member
    August 16

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    Very touchy... it's not easy to find good and sincere friends... may God give you strength to cope with the loss...

    mina

  • alexheartbroken
    August 15

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    good

    i lost my mamaw couple a months ago i still miss her

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