She
can be best described as
confused
and she knows this is par for the 18-year course
but
she still wishes for the unattainable
serenity
evades her like a rabbit from a wolf
perchance
she swims through more minds than she knows
humble
she's not; more like self-worthless
lovers
have promised her the stars and all they did was
steal
her dreams.....
she
is me
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8-4-09
From my heart to your eyes
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She is Sensational
"she still wishes for the unattainable
serenity
evades her like a rabbit from a wolf"
I love the way that serenity travels seamlessly from thought to thought; as if not grasped yet seen all the same. This piece makes me feel truly as if I am connected to you, both in heart and soul...
Confusion is often a path that leads to frustration, further leading to understanding and eventually freedom. I hear you. While she may be you, it may also be he- ultimately also me.
Great write as always Kelly... Keep up the good work.
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Thank you for reading, commenting.... and hearing.
It means a lot.
-Kelly
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excellence...this is open honest and poetically captivating
you have a real strength to your work
bravo
T
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Thank You! =]
-K
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poor boy lass...
deserves 5 stars.
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Not only did your comment below melt my heart..... your new photo just threw me. I couldn't say anything but "DAYUM" for a good five minutes till Sam slapped me upside the head. Holy Mother of God.
I'll be home sometime tonight and we'll talk. Is t'u mo gr'ah, rogue, you've stolen my heart yet again.
Kelly
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I would steal the stars and bring them to your dreams,
and if you asked me for the moon somehow
id get it........
id lasso saturn down to earth
to take a ring for your finger gypsy,
i would find all your stolen dreams and wrap the in a pretty package
and give them back to you
so you may begin having them again....
and i can begin to make them all come true.
Together we will turn all the confusion in to a bright day.
A stunning poem of a sweet and gentle soul in a jaded ,cold, conniving world.
Things get better baby
when im with you,
Liam.
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wow
well done such a beautiful and feminine poem....i now know you for a she.....lol -
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LOL yes I am a she, just like it says on my page
Thanks for reading and commenting
-K
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have promised her the stars and all they did was
steal
her dreams.....
she
is me
cool could have made moe imagery but i should talk..good write i enjoyed this
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Thanks hon =]
-K
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Very Fine!
A sharp and most excellent self examination that too few of us dare to attempt. It says that you are 18, is that a typo, did you mean 81? as that ususally is the time that folks figure this stuff out if they're lucky. A superb poem!
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I guess I'm just extra lucky *smiles* I think about this kind of crap all the time, lol.
Thank you for reading and commenting!
-K
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