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Glittered Sin




A dire need
to release tarred sin,
upstands me, crossed.

The splatter of glitter
boosts my fingertips
into the western sunset;
~a strip opened eternally.

I choose to send my sin
onto a holy path.
~streaming into a dead sea.


Author notes

This is the first poem that I have written in over a year. There have been a lot of tragedies and changes in my life since I was last involved with AllPoetry. I would like to hear the truth about your opinions.

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  • Uniquely-Scarred
    September 24
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    i love your word choice in this


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    August 27

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    Wow. Wow. Welcome back. :: jaw drops ::
    Your poetry has been a huge and terrible loss. I am so glad you're back. I can't wait to read more. This was an amazing, powerful poem. Beautiful and stunningly emotional.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • kareneisenlord gold member
    August 22

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    I like it!

    The imagery is both vivid and moving. I could relate too! Thank you for sharing this. Keep up the beautiful metaphor and colorful descriptions. Nice work!


  • tawk gold member
    August 16

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    Wow what a very thought provoking write. It sounds like you are moving on and leaving the past behind, oh how I wish one day to be able to do this with my life, past demons who abused me still haunt me each day. I am so sorry that you have had such a hard year. I am so glad you are writing again. I wish you the best. Hugs

    Theresa