dishonesty bleeds from every word you speak,
and my trust in you slowly dissipates day by day.
your eyes tell a different story.
I can see another side of you.
a hidden side of secret passion and care,
emotions meant for someone else.
finally you admit your feelings for the girl next door,
and my dreams of us, together and happy, die.
how come it's her on your arm,
when I was the one who told you the monsters weren't real?
they're only a figment of someone's imagination in a movie.
Author notes
prompt - your eyes tell a different story.
A contest entry
- Mystery Prompt Quickie # 4 by Beautiful-N-Broken.
550 points, ended August 17, 8 entries
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Wow, I really like this alot, it's like a complete story all into a poem. It's fantastic ^.^
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thanks,
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Beautiful take on the prompt. Love this write! Thanks so much for entering and good luck hun!
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thanks, and you're welcome!
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O.o Weird take on it. I don't know if it's about lovers, or mothers. Lol. I say this because, It obviously shows the love. And holding on the arm.. But would lovers tell each other the monster isn't real..? But then again.. It may be symbolic, and im to lazy to think. ^^ Heehee
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it's a girl who likes the guy but he's with someone else.
the whole noster thing happened when they were little.
thanks for the comment,
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Your prompt is: Your eyes tell a different story.
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thanks,
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