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Brown Fire

 

If fire were brown,

it would be the color of your eyes. 

But for now,

your eyes are fire.

 

And soon I'll watch them

ignite the wicks 

of others.

 

:)

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  • sxylolypop-aka dj gold member
    November 27
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    awwwwww i love this its soo cute and very thoughtfull a very nice addition to your work wonderfull art from another true artist. i look forward to reading alot more of your work. all the love in the world friend


  • Lencio Rodrigues
    August 29
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    short and powerful and clever. Love your thoughts!

    Lencio


  • Xfallenangel tearsX
    August 24
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    hehe i really like this one good write m8!!! xxx cant wait for ur next poem

  • Topnotchsy
    August 21

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    Powerful write. I like the way you describe the subject of your poem, then contrast that with your image of yourself and the worry that you may not add up. The last line rang really strong!!


  • Lj-
    August 16

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    I like how you chose to end this; the last line really makes this.
    Nicely written.
    How have ya been??


    • Luken gold member
      August 17
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      Hello, YOU!

      I have been well! I moved to university recently. I actually start classes tomorrow!

      How have YOU been?

      • Lj-
        August 17
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        Classes already? Jeez. Around here classes don't start till September.

        I'm alright I suppose, been better.
        Summer went by too quickly.

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