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The fastest man on Earth

A man called Bolt can run quite fast
Though others try he blasts straight past
I doubt you'll see Usain come last
In any sprinting race

He doesn't seem to need to try
The gun goes bang we watch him fly
It's done before you blink an eye
He's won another race

One hundred meters, then the two
Far faster than the fleetest few
Since he's begun the sport is new
He's changed this sort of race

So I shall sit and wait until
They're on the blocks and very still
The starters gun then comes the thrill
The fastest ever race!



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  • Macsword
    August 16

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    Good

    It reads very fas however!:")


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    August 16
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    I think you've shot your bolt, bro.



  • Legend silver member
    August 15

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    Me thinks that it would be some fun
    to grab hold of the starters gun
    then just before the race is run
    to shoot Usain right in the bum

    OK the last line did not rhyme but i did come second to You and last to Bolt
    Wonderful Jeff


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    August 15

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    Lmao Okay..well good luck with that
    I have a race of my own I wana run..
    You up for it??

    Thanks for sharing

    Love
    Tory


  • DesolatELifE
    August 15
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    Sure sounds exciting.

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