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The Game

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Music featured by John Williams, theme from Schindlers List.

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  • Tqop
    September 10

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    Okay. That's impressive. It's fancy. It blew my mind. It impressed me. I was wondering, 'How did he do that with the video?' I was thinking to myself, 'I want to do that too.' Great job. I thought the story to be hopelessly romantic. Excellent job on your creativity.


  • TerriMac gold member
    August 21

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    Lovely

    As always - but if I had to criticise which ofourse I dont it would be that on my pc the video played too slowly and I lost the rhythm of the poem! which itself was lovely. Hope you find it again and next time you win


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    August 15

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    A very sad poem set to a very haunting piece of music. Never gamble on love ... the price is too high!
    My only criticism would be the video, I think the image would have been better if the camera had remained still and the sea had moved.

    Sue
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  • passim silver member
    August 15

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    Sometimes we just have to say game over, and throw the cards in. Lovely poetry, beautifully presented.


  • BluesMan gold member
    August 15

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    Excellent, heartfelt saddness that I know all to well. The way you present your poem with the video is wonderful. It makes a bigger impact on the reader.

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