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ab initio

 

 

 

 

yesterday

                     said

 

today wouldn’t understand

 

 

 

 

 

 

but I think it does

 

 

 

 

 

                             it’s tomorrow
                             that might not

 

 

 

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  • Max Alexandersson
    October 28
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    Hmmmmmm, don't know about the composition. Like the words.

  • Topnotchsy
    August 19

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    I've always liked your work, but your recent poems have taken it to a new level. I love this write!!


  • rebel lips
    August 17
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    yes yes, love it, i am so glad i found this.


  • Ez Writer silver member
    August 15

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    A great poem and theory !
    Short yet succinct 'tis an eloquent write .
    Beautifully expressed ! To read - a delight !
    Thank you a pleasure to read on this day ...
    Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy


  • sweet arrival gold member
    August 15

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    EXCELLENT. you would think tomorrow would understand, after all it has hindsight, yet it seems to be the most unforgiving at times. i REALLY like this. bookmarking in my 'keepers' list.


  • alpPDCjr12
    August 15

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    Well since you're thinking about the bad that might happen in the future, "worry" might be a good title, or "circles of worry" because it's going to repeat tomorrow, or actually "dread" sounds better to me. Or maybe just "circles." The worry in the poem makes me think of what it's worrying over, which might be shame or embarassment--things you might want to take into account when looking for a title. Nice write, keep working


    • silverscent gold member
      August 15

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      Thanks but in the meantime I think I found one. "ab initio" means from the beginning, and after all, the uncertainty of the future has been going on from what seems like the beginning.

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