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stripped

All I could do
Was pull my sheets up around me tight
In an attempt to cover
All that you bared

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I'm a lil better now

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  • acidfeathers
    August 17

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    Wow. I absolutely know the feeling.

    The length works perfectly. You get the point across immediately, and you leave enough unsaid that I'm sure I'm not the only person who read this and was reminded of something they've been through. I think everybody could relate to this.


  • TheStupidLamb
    August 16
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    What's wrong?


    • A-Sky-Lark
      August 16
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      nothing is.
      It's like when someone you know rips out your heart and shows it to you saying "look, look here".
      after that display you need to heal, right? but you know more about yourself.


  • blackrabbit. gold member
    August 16
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    you are so beautiful..


  • Survivingbychance
    August 15
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    Wow. That's short, but deep. Good job!

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