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No More of THAT

Paint the violent expression violet
in spluttering apoplectic strokes
while I grin wickedly spinning away
with your pride in a jar.

You pursue uttering the unutterables
while mothers place hands over ears
of the innocent younglings who gape
in giggling gasps, while applauding.

Laughing I toss the jar high in the air
it lands to shatter in the dirt
as you scramble to reclaim it
putting back together your ego.

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  • kylierenea
    August 22

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    Great poem, very good use of your words Keep up the good work and thanks for entering my contest


  • Myjoy gold member
    August 16
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    Hmmmm very different, I really liked the end. Good luck. Well done.

  • I've got a jar of diiiirt...
    ^^