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Forever My Love

Forever my love

"I can't believe you are still here after all these years"
Forever My Love
"Even after all we had been through?"
Forever My Love
"You strayed away from me, will you again?"
NEVER My Love
"You love me to this day still?"
Forever My Love
"Will you wait for me?"
Forever My Love
"No matter how long this takes me?"
Forever My Love
"These scars you've placed upon me may never heal"
I will work to heal them
Forever My Love
"My heart still aches for you"
Mine have ached 
Forever My Love
"My arms still long to hold you"
Mine have longed
Forever My Love
"Do you still long to make love to me?"
Forever My Love
"So you will love me until...?"
Forever My Love
"Even if I am in love with another?"
Forever My Love
"Until the end of time itself you will love me?"
No matter what, I will love you
FOREVER MY LOVE

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    August 15
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    welcome to all poetry

    This is interestingly laid out. Nice exchange between the voices, good poem.

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    Shawna
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  • M.dizzle14
    August 15

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    I like it alot

    I love the way you use forever my love. It shows true emotion and I feel like you are a great writer never hesitate to write becuase the words you have written dance off the page and into my head and showing me what I read. HA! that rhymed! any way I think your a good writer I mean that!

    -M.dizzle14