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Jane

A girl who makes everything worthwhile,
A girl who always somehow makes me smile,
She's loving, beauty, intelligence, all wrapped into one,
She shines brighter than any star or sun,
No matter the distance, I want her to know,
That even when the time comes for me to go,
She's beautiful, a soul worth fighting for too,
Many hardships may come, we'll see them through,
So take my hand, a leap of faith, this much is true
I know for a fact...I'm falling for you.

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  • AAA Taurus The Bull gold member
    August 15

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    Excellent

    I like the message. This was very insightful. and true, Very well done, and very much enjoyed awesome closing.No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can aee.Alexander QQ...