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Blue



walk
the
edge

land
and
sea

surf
breaks
sweetly

ocean’s
breath
continuous

seashells
dot
sand

broken
but
beautiful

much
like
me

briny
deep
serenity

white
laced
water

touches
painted
toes

nothing
else
matters

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  • Bob Fox
    August 15

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    Poet

    Perhaps at times the beauty and solitude act as a cleansing for the heart. The fine images you have created takes me there. Always a pleasure to read.