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we folded paper
airplanes to take our despairs
far, far away.

A contest entry

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  • DecorusApparatus
    August 14

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    Strong. Very strong. You made the most of the brevity and the silence in this speaks a lot louder than the words. The lack of the title accentuates this well.
    Thank you very much for your entry.
    --Katie.


  • Dreamer With Dreams silver member
    August 14

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    I like it. Not much was said,
    but it definitely stirred my mind.
    'Twas thought provoking.
    Nicely done.
    Good luck!

    Safely hidden in the darkness,

    ~ The Rocker Who Lost All