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Alcohol

I look at you through the botom of your glass

it magnifies a future with you...No Thanks I think i'll pass!.

 

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  • Stolen memories
    August 16

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    Wow.. very good its really really deep, and I fear you may have lived though a time with some one who was an alcoholic... this is very hard to do but I'm glad you are passing on this one This is a great poem, good job.

    This one is good I like the whole aspect of it.

    Rhyme +20
    Under two lines +30
    PP -5
    Option -5

    Total: 40/60pt's

    Brownie

    great job +22

    TOTAL 62pt's


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    August 15

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    too late... you already have him lol

    have a pears for me please
    Juls


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    August 14

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    I'll drink to that! Just kidding.

    Wise words Dolores.


  • Pure Thought silver member
    August 14
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    Short and strong. Well said.