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A Poem Not Good Enough For You.

Your kiss once soft and simple
Has transfigured into necessity
I need you here by my side

I love you

The touch I took so lightly
Now makes skin ache in withdrawl
I need you here by my side

I love you

Your voice slithered in my ear
Now my ears bleed for the sound
I need you here by my side

I love you

They never knew just who you were
They never knew just who they had

So take your time in getting well
I need you whole and healthy
I want to dwell the earth with you

No one else can fill your shoes

I love you

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Picklepoo

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  • doyouloveit
    August 20, 2009

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    So nicely written to the one you love and what a humble title you came up with

    Your kiss once soft and simple
    Has transfigured into necessity
    I need you here by my side

    These are the lines that I love the most and hope you never lose them for your love

  • whatitschwas
    August 16, 2009
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    <3