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Title Needed

I think
I may
have offended someone.
No, not you.
Don't give yourself so much credit.
I mean someone in the cosmic sense.
SOMEONE.
The nebulous SOMEONE
at the end of the universe.

What did I do?

What did I do,
that you have to do this
to me?

Because,
goddammit,
IT HURTS.

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Found this in my poetry folder. Fascinating, no?

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  • Kayla
    September 18
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    you do realize that in the second to last line, it now says ""??

  • Kayla Bryanon
    August 17

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    it is always interesting to say what one can unearth in one's poetry folder, or binder. im not much good at titles, maybe use a line from the poem, like "what did i do". not overly creative, but very relevant.