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Silent grief, silent hope

Over a shallow grave of blood and flesh
a mere fistful of tears are flung.
Brief life with questionable purpose;
unseen, unheard, unsung.

Untold life will soon be forgotten-
Tiny flicker of hope it once held
of unseen tears, unheard laughter,
and unsung lullabies before bed.

So life goes on behind a false facade,
but the faintest grief still lingers.
And with it remains the tiny flicker of hope
still yearning to count tiny fingers.

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Prompt #2: Emotions... the title and poem speak for themselves.

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  • McRae by nature
    August 18

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    This sounds like the mourning of a mother who has miscarried a child. Really well written and very sad as well. Thanks for entering.