Hide with me beneath slumber skies
Where the monsters of the waking world can’t find
Stay with me lost in a dreamland
A secret for the lonely and dismayed
Here no one will judge you
Or tell you to just go away
No one will beat and hurt you
You have a place to run away
One day you’ll stay to long
The drugs will not fade
Then we can stay forever in heaven
Maybe that days today
Author notes
Sleeping was the prompt
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Comments
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I really like what you did with this prompt.
Favorite lines:
Here no one will judge you
Or tell you to just go away
No one will beat and hurt you
You have a place to run away
The rhyme is nice there, good write, you did very well.
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I like this, it's reminiscent of the tranquilly that makes dreaming worth sleeping the day away.
Seems weird to dream of sleeping forever.
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23. Sleeping
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