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Someone

Everyday I go through the motions,
doing what is expected of me
without a thought
or moment to call my own.
People take but never give,
I am alive but never live.
Does anyone care?

Someday I will stop.
I will walk away from all of this
with my head held high
and my life my own again.
People speak but never talk,
I stand and will soon walk.
Will anyone notice?

This is my prayer;
someone please notice.

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  • superbanana
    August 14

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    I empathise with you, people are better at recieving than giving. I hope you can walk away from it.


    • bluefirerose
      August 14
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      Things really aren't as bad as they seem in my writing; today was just a particularly rough day. I have had things far worse than this; trust me, this is a cake walk compared to the past.