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Cloaking the truth

I attempt to delude myself that its all fine
Though really I had lied to my closest friends

White lies to protect you from my pain
Attitude deteriorating with the disorder
Slowly creeping back upon me again

Rejecting any help from you,
Ever wondered why this is so?
A trigger to many; I drive it away
Losing faith in those around me slowly
Lieing still and still trying to fight it
You will always doubt, no matter what.

Immobilization from such a dumb thing
Never ending result that will keep nagging

Justifying myself all the time
Ugly as I look into the mirror
Never ending lies that occur
Exposure to lectures; They scare me!!

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Author notes

I won't go into this too much but Only good friends will understand what I mean by this poem .....

The prompt from a friends contest was :

4) It's only half past the point of no return.
Pink: Glitter In The Air.

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Comments

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  • Wutz Luv
    October 20

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    It was really in June. Nice acrostic. Sad write about feeling the pain from white lies to not hurt others. Well written.


  • TwoTimeSurvivor
    August 31

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    Attitude deteriorating with the disorder
    Slowly creeping back upon me again

    Oooh, that's really sad/

    It was really in June, huh?
    It says to me that you'd told someone that it was another time. Whatever it was.

    I don';t see this entered into a contest... is it still open?


    • DinkyDiver gold member
      August 31
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      Nah i didnt make it in time for the contest hun. Thankyou for your great comment, you read this well ;-) x


  • moaner
    August 29

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    i'm to positive to disbelieve your great efforts, that's why i am happy you tell me the truth, or i would never know what was really going on until i looked into your eyes. great write babe. here for you when ever xxxxx


  • awannabepoet
    August 23

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    Never feel the need to do such things for in reality people do quite understand and if you let them at times you will see they can be there for you when you need them most.

    It is normal I would say to be in self defense for both yourself and those around you but from one afflicted to another best the real you come out and play.

    Just a thought you know, the poem is excellent.

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