Met you in the soft words of poetry
Just a year ago
A million miles away.
Met you in the crowded sites of the internet
Just a few months ago
A million miles away.
Met you on the chatting phone
Just a few weeks ago
A million miles away.
Met you through the short texted words
Just a few days ago
A million miles away.
Will meet you in auatralia
Just a few years away
A million miles away.
But till that million miles closes
Just a few years away
And you will be just 0 miles away from me,
Your still just a memory.
A contest entry
- Your life in poetry by catstar.
400 points, ended September 28, 55 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love, Please by Painted Nails.
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Nice. Very loving and I love the different time phrases you use and then end with the last line: 'your still just a memory'.
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thanks. glad you like it.
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Very heart felt
If its a true poem than is this person on this website??? this is yet another amazing write and I look forward to read more.
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yep. this person is on this site.
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whoooooooooooooo ? is this a true poem ? it was so sweet and beautiful, i liked reading it. you have written this so beautifully, others will surely like it as well.
Shuberth
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i love this one. its a true poem.
one of my best ones so far.
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