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So She Thought

Three years goes by and you still don't fight for her.
Three years goes by and you're still hurting her.
Three years goes by and she still loves you.
Three years goes by and she can't talk about it.
Three years goes by and you love somebody else.

These three years of pain.
Many days of heartache and self-deception.
I remember when she knew you.
You had faith.
Like you knew that it would be you&her some day.
Well, it has always been you and her.
Or so she thought.
She needs to know why you betrayed her trust in you.
And why you all the sudden found a knew love.
Take her hand and save her life.
Her two broken wings has bled forever.
Like an angel left to die.
She was so in love with you, so she thought.
She's a mess.
She's bled enough.

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  • Punkrocker1991
    December 3
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    wow

    this poem is amazing. you

  • That was raw, painful, emotional,
    i was in that position.
    It sux. but its life.


  • xeroabyss II
    September 4
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    Sucks to feel sometimes.
    Sucks even more to remember, and feel all over again.


  • PandorasBox
    August 16

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    Oh how sad...and no answer or reason will ever be enough to make us understand why some people betray us, sweetie...those of us that would never do such a thing just can't comprehend the 'reasons' they give I'm sorry for your pain