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With These Bruises

I don’t bruise easily but congratulations
You’ve managed what others haven’t

You say you’re not happy about it
But we both know your smiling

You say that you didn’t mean too
But we both know that you’ve planned it

You say that you’re so sorry
But we both know that your just not

You say that you won’t do it again
But we both know that you can’t help but do it

You say that I want too much
But we both know you don’t want enough

You say that I whine all of the time
But we both know that you’re the one who’s whining

You say that I am the selfish one
But we both know you take more then I could ever give


So congratulations on what you’ve accomplished
I’m sure that you’re very proud of it all
But I’m done with this
Done with you

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  • WanderingSoul
    August 15
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    You Go Girl

    I can totally relate. Going thru something similar myself. Feel free to message me if you ever want a shoulder.

    • KikuFire
      August 21
      Edit | Reply
      awww thank you, i appreciate that very much.
      I hope whatever your situation is, its working out for the better.