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Take It Out

Anger
Pealing back my skin
Eating me away
Rip it off me
Sadness
Striping back my muscles
Eating me away
Tear it off me
Heartache
Pick out my tendons
Eating me away
Cut it off me
Bitter-sweetness
Drilling into my bones
Eating me away
Gouge it off me

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