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Morning After Nights

I could lay here forever
Just you and me here in bed
Me listening to your gentle breathing
Your chest rising under my head
As we snooze away the rain filled days
And all on through the nights
We’ll be here together
Where your arms are warm around me
Your strength filled body embracing mine
And soon when the sun begins to rise
Hands will raise to touch and feel
Eyes will flutter, broken seals
Then in sunlight lips will move to meet
Because the taste of you is just so sweet

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  • celestial
    August 15
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    This is beautiful and such sweet passion here. One of the best feeling is a lover's embrace. Such a wonderful write.