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Making Love

It doesn't matter where we are because
We’ll be making love in the
Moonlight
Sunlight
Under the night sky
During the day time
We’ll be in the kitchen (against the wall)
We’ll be in the study (just down the hall)
We’ll be in the living-room (moving on the floor)
We’ll be in the bedroom (hearing you 'baby', saying ‘more, more’)
We’ll never make it through the front door
Baby you move in an addictive way
Can’t say anything other then I’ll stay because
We’ll be making love in the
Moonlight
Sunlight
Under the night sky
During the day time
Can’t you see that you’ve got a hold on me
To keep me coming back through your door
See me here down on my knees begging you please, please
Let this magic take control and the moment unfold
Baby, all I want to do is be loving you
Be showing you that our love is true
That I want more then just doing you because
We’ll be making love in the
Moonlight
Sunlight
Under the night sky
During the day time
Ohhh—h, we’ll be, we’ll be, we’ll be making love

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  • Rugia
    August 18
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    I love it very much, reminds me of myself.....


  • WanderingSoul
    August 14
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    I love it just the way it is. All I can say is keep the flow going its awesome just the way it is but did leave me wanting more.

    • KikuFire
      August 21
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      lol so i shouldn't be adding on huh

      i actually did this in song form so yeah haha