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Symoblic Ring

This symbolic ring
Is stuck on my finger
Just like you and me
It all fits together
The perfect match
The right fitting
Darling what you do to me
None of it can be explained
So may this simple symbol
As I slip it over your finger
Sealing our fates together
With a kiss that says
You are my forever

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  • aboardthetitanic
    August 14
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    I Really Liked This Poem its short but very powerfull