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American Dream

We stand together
Divided beings united
Were hope will fly with eagle wings
Were money is gained through more then breeding
Were courage can be found in every golden heart
Were flowers are worn by children and not graves unmarked

On this chain-moussed ground
Every man, woman, and child will grow
Their potential will be achieved
Through the means of opportunity
A race against self and pride
To deliver independent success
In each field with surprise

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