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Moon has Light

What are you to do when the moon light is blinding you

Saphire tears are glinting in the night sky as they fall
Dripping softly from the tip of your chin as you cry

All you want is comfort and love, is that so hard
What difficulty is this life to be lead by one so young
Little guidance is to be found for this chaos covered territory
But at the end of it lies the fruits of labor, it's paradise

What are you to do when the moon is shinning on you

Clouds of grays, whites and blacks swirling across its surface
It's mood is your mood as it sways your inner ocean to submission

The true feeling of peace and calm is all you call for
Experienced, you think you know that your done and at your end
But really your only at the end of your first beginning
So now something new has started for you to do

What are you to do when the moon is full and tilting forward

Dust that glitters from the Sun and Stars fall into your eyes
The blind will see again and the open minded will see darkness

When the Sun rises all you will feel is moonlight on your skin
Buried inside beats a struggle without direction, seeking

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