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Vase Of My Tear Filled Heart

I miss you but what can I do,

I hurt your heart and your pride,

And now all I can do is sit and cry,

I've been left all alone at night,

Tears are filling my lungs,

Choking out my last breath,

I question if I'm worth coming back too,

And if I wait for more then forever,

Will you think about me again,

With a smile on your lips,

The song of me in your heart,

And with pride outshining the Sun,

To know that I belong to you, only you.

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