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Moonlight Blind

'When Moonlight is in my eyes, I am blind to thee,
When love is in my eyes, I see thee most clearly'

~Love shouldn't be blind
Love should be opening your eyes
To the other world that lays behind
The close lids of those who are dreaming
Swimming in misconceived fantasy
The moonlight is shining upon thee
Making me blind to the reality
Till Love fills my blinded eyes
Where I can see thee most clearly

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  • nicswi
    October 17
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    LOVED IT

  • nicswi
    October 17
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    Hi Can I use this poem in my personal photobook? I will credit theauthor

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