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Lies For The Gullible

A part of me wishes
that all of your lies were
really the truth with a
few smug marks on them
so that when i accepted
them like everything else
i wouldn't feel so guilty
about fooling my self



The other part of me
just wishes that
you would take your lies
and suffocate on them
till you realized
what a mess it is to lie
to the gullible and faithful

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