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First Time For Our Everything

The first time
I saw your face
I heard your voice
I said I love you
I heard you say it back to me

The very first time for our everything
I knew right away that
you were going to be the only one
who I was going to Love
who I was going yearn for
who I was going to cry after
Who I was going to long for night and day

The very first time for our everything
I knew at the very center of my heart
that you were going to be my first
my one and only, my precious last
and that you were going to be
the only one who could hurt me
and break my heart this way

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