If u R looking for someone to love
I have no heart
If u R looking for someone to talk
i have no ears
if I made a sign u wont understand
if u welcome me I won’t stay
If called me urs
i wil disappear.
if R seeking for sumone 4ever
I wont last that long
If u R loving me
U should know
that u R digging me a grave.
Its a Remix Time
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wow
you say dont love ya but you ma e-buddy haha i wuvs ya anyways
this was very deep in a non-expressing, expressive way lol
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This is really good. I'm not sure I like the chat speak, but that's how you express yourself. You have a deep view on love, love is so complicated. This was really honest and I like that, you don't hold anything back, sometimes that good, when written well and in certain situations. Anyway good job, and thanks for your comment on my piece.
Blessings,
~Michaela~ -
.... its very honest ... haha nice its a shame we humans cant always express our harsh truths in such a blunt way good work =]
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Loce it excenlente
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Very clear, and great job
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Wow
Thought provoking indeed! I like the negative/positive of it - good write "
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Great job. Simple but is deep at the same time. Keep writing and I will keep reading
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something to think about
This poem, makes one think about what love really can be about and whether that person you really love is actually understanding where you are coming from. And if they really care you at all about or what you are saying. Sometimes, talking to the one you love, is like having to shout at a brick wall. And it doesn't always work. I have to take one day at a time. For I am a 51 year old who has never been married and had many times thought, I would find the love I so longingly want for the rest of my life. But it has always escaped me, at every turn. Life is short and we have to make, it what we want it to be. To find that small measure of happiness, where ever it may be. Please do read any and all of my poems. Love the comments.
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great write
i have a poem out called Gravesdigger dillema that is similiar to this one. -
I like that its very direct about the message, awesome poem.
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simple.
usually this kind of writing annoys the crap out of me but this is quite a nice piece. Good job
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gud morning
i dont lik dis too, butt i had to rite this 2 tell em that they should'nt luv me and be close 2 me.
so..
i got to go to pee now
bi
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