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Risaki

Risaki, risaki,
Angels in the snow,
Snow angels when I've gone,
Snow angles when I'm home,
Risaki, risaki,
White trails across the floor,
Ice flacks fading away,
Ice flacks fading some more,
Risaki, risaki,
Innocence left at the door,
Purity changing,
Purity that is no more,
Risaki, risaki,
Disappearing...

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  • Satansapprentice
    September 24
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    beautiful

    so beautiful
    love the style poem and rhyme scheme