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We Are ALL Dying

If crimson fountains could erase
The guilty look upon your face
You would know I'm sorry...

I didn't mean to start that fight
& you will forever remember that night
Can you find a way to forgive me?

That hurt filled look in your eyes
That painstaking look you can't disguise
Is tearing my soul apart...

You drink to drown my memory
A statistic is something I never wanted to be
I just hope you have the strength to survive...

My body is gone
But I'm still looking on
As you hold the .45 to your head...

Don't choose this fate
I told you I'd wait
There are other ways to heal the hurt...

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  • Miels
    August 23

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    good

    love the poem would love it more if i did not know what you were talking about call my tigger