huh?
yes i'm an angel
of course i can fly
i don't wanna talk about heaven
or about how it feels to die
my bad attitude?well what about you?
everthing you hear isn't always true
and as far as this bottle go...well it's just wine
no you can't have any it's all mine
i see the way you're looking at me
i happen to know you're supposed to be married
thought i didn't know?
well shows what you know
that language is so uncalled for
is that how you're gonna talk at heaven's door?
sorry?well you should be
now if you'll excuse me
i have people to do and things to see
opps i guess no more wine for me
bless you
A contest entry
- This is a quickie for my friends of trekkergirl group only by trekkergirl.
400 points, ended August 15, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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okay I am going to try this again. I liked this very much. It was indeed a very interesting write. I think AP has something against me because it wouldn't let me comment on this poem. Kept saying error so Iam coming back to it and trying again.
I did not need a picture for this poem because your words drew one for me.
Nicely written. Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering it into my contest.
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