Why do you blame me?
You promised me that you wouldn't take long
Think of the years you've spent overses
Even if my surroundings din't like you
I choose you!
That's all mattered
I look at my age
I couldn't be patient anymore
I felt like there was a lot of pressure
I felt like life was going to be over
That's why I needed a fresh start
Please tell me what you think
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Well B, it's hard to make comment on someone's heartache as expressed here. I can understand the pain, but I cannot judge the words or the feelings....This is a short write and that gives the feeling of fresh pain and the thoughts are a bit disordered, so that too suggets written in a condition of newly pained...That's about all I can say. You speak your mind and heart in simple and plaintive language and I feel the hurt you felt in the moment....Hope it gets better for you soon, Peace, Rhonda
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