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Almost

Dancing or crying in the rain,
which one is it,
because I'm almost over it,

They say that 'I love you',
is the best three word phrase,
but something tells me 'Go to hell',
could be even better,

Holding or pushing me,
which one is it,
because I'm almost over it,

They say that 'I love you',
is the best eight letter phrase,
but something tells me 'Bullshit',
could be just as good,

Keep or release me,
which one is it,
because I'm almost over it.

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