There are certain people
You cant take your eyes off
They walk in, up you look
There are certain people
Who make you laugh
At the littlest things
There are certain people
You cant stop thinking of
All day and through the night
There are certain people
Who can make it feel right
When you know its so wrong
There are certain people
You would try make happy
Even if it hurts you
There are certain people
Who hurt you with out knowing
Because you pretend its fine
There are certain people
You cant say goodbye to
Although they've already left
There are certain people
Who you lose to another
But you will never forget
There are certain people
You will always take back
No matter how deep they cut you
You were that certain person
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This is very beautifully written. I know I was like this at one time. Many people can relate to this. I enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest.
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wow...a great write..the entire piece is so truthful and real..
there are certain people who write so amazingly..and u r one of them..
i enjoyed it thoroughly...thanx for sharin..
take care..
ur pal..
~Parth
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WOW... so very true dear friend.... I did the take back thing a lot over 18 years.. it took forever to get away from it.. very strong writehear . Keep penning friend for I shall keep on reading.
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This poem does feel very honest and is very well written. Great job! There are certain people like that.
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this is a truthful poem that very much relateable. The ending is great also. Good job.
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this is a very good and a positive piece of write, i can relate to almost every aspects of it, you wrote it freely and the emotion of your reference was well felt here, this certain person must be a very lucky person, this are the secret experiences we have in our live that we mostly keep to ourselves because we feel the people we share them with might think we are crazy, but hey sometimes sharing these kind of experiences and thiughts makes things much easier for some of us. i enjoyed reading this and thanks for sharing.
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well i thought i was the lucky one till he broke up with me
but i wont get all down on u about it ae. i bet u dont wana hear some chick rant about a boy lol
thanks for your comment i really appreciate it
thanks
kmp
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this was really good. I really liked how you offset the final line. The whole thing was together, and the spaces before the last lines really made it stand out. Great write!
MfG,
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You forgot one " there are certain people who write poetry like this that captivates your attention" as you have done. great write as well as excellent view on life itself. Coming from someone so young it is amazing. Thank you for sharing.
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This is really, really good. I really enjoyed it, keep writing.
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Very well-written, you spoke of great truth!
Nela
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There are certain people
You cant say goodbye to
Although they've already left
I love it! This above excerpt is my favorite part. Thanks for sharing! -
I have to totally agree with you. There are those people who gain your attention for whatever reason. Some is that they look or act different. Some is that they have the bluest of eyes. For whatever reason you are hooked. Great write here.
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