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freedom of soul

My heart bleeds, and You look innocently at my pain.
My arms and soul are numb , and you wonder why I wont hold you to me.
Why I cast you and others to the side, as if I'm waiting for the wind to carry me off..

Well I am waiting , bond to these chains that tear my flesh and render my will broken and my soul useless .
but that has changed . My luck has arrived..Smiling , I see Your face one last lime.

Priceless !!

No words are need between us , Your time has come to an End...
You have failed , I am Finally.......

FREE...

 

 

 

 

Shana hester wrote this.. Im Spirit Mother's Granddaughter !!!!!

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  • kareneisenlord gold member
    September 8

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    I can't say that I understand this entirely. It is a little disturbing to see a young girl like that. I don't know what to say. I feel pain reading this and the photo. Maybe I am old-fashioned. Did this person let you down and fail you? For the first time in a long time, I am entirely confused by a write of yours. Could you enlighten me? karen

    In reading that this is writen by SpiritMother's granddaughter, I am further perplexed and saddened. The poem itself is nice, but the picture definitely should be under adult material (erotica.) One may think that is free, but it is an illusion and further chaining of the soul and body. Some people go through this process first to realize it - and go through Darkness to be Free. Blessings ~


  • Topaze gold member
    August 14
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    A lovely piece, my best wishes.